Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
:iconchinara:

Artist's Comments

My day is always the same.
In the morning, I fight Dib.
In the afternoon, I fight Dib.
Even in my dreams, I fight him.
Truth be told, my life isn't full with surprises, especially not since I was sent to this dirty planet, but I never mind. For me, my day was perfect when I could face Dib and fight.
Before I knew, I waited impatiently, no eagerly for Dib to confront me.
Before I knew, I longed for every meeting we had, no matter how much we hurt each other -
Before I knew, I was hopelessly addicted to him.
I wished it could stay like this forever on; but of course, as much as I'm loyal to my Tallest, I knew it couldn't.
Humans just had to develop emotions.


"... What?" Shivering a little, Zim stepped away from Dib. His colored eyes were widened, staring at the human in front of him, a glare of disbelief in them.
"I'll say it again, Zim." Dib took a deep breath and prayed silently. "I love you."
Silence befell them, letting them forget where they were. Both of them were unable to move, waiting for the other to react -
Suddenly the alien broke into laughter.
"Hah! Love me? Love me, you say!" Zim had to hold his stomach, laughing so hard. "You love the almighty ZIM, you say? Of course, of course you do, everyone loves Zim!" Stretching his arms sidewards and holding his head high, his laughter didn't subside. "Such a beautiful lie! So pretty and full with slimy intents! You're so easy to see through, Dibworm, just like glass!"
"..."
"Oh, the thought of you giving me stinky meat! Isn't hilarious?" The alien enjoyed it terribly. "So stupid that I could laugh my head off!"
"..."
"What? So blinded by my powerful presence that you can't speak anymore?" Zim kept laughing. "Come on, I figured out your strategy. Stop playing."
Instead of an answer, a determined glare came from Dib. The boy didn't move as if he was trying to tell the alien something.
"... Come on. Say something!" Zim stopped his laughter, looking demandingly at his precious enemy.
"... I'm not."
"What?"
"I'm not playing." The human's fists shivered when he spoke; but Zim didn't believe him.
"It's ENOUGH, Dibworm! More of your lies and I... Hm, what could I do to you?" The alien's thoughts went astray as he thought over the possibilities.
"... I KNEW it was a bad idea to tell you this. Of course it was, why couldn't I listen to myself?" Dib shook his head, looking down.
"Well, that's the result if you want to fool ME, the almighty ZIM, with such a foolish foolery!"
"I'm not lying." Dib raised his head once more, looking deep into Zim's eyes. "I really love you."
The alien startled, staring at his enemy for some moments. Hesitatingly, Zim turned his head aside. "Stop it."
"Why should I if it's true?"
"I said stop it." Zim's hands turned into fists, shivering lightly. He knew it wasn't a lie; he knew it - and as he realized this, he also knew that nothing would stay as it was.
"But Zim, I really -"
"Don't say it!" No! He didn't want to hear it! He didn't want to remember it! He didn't want anything to be destroyed by a single, simple phrase!
"Please, listen to me, I - "
"Shut your mouth!" Zim's fingers clawed into his head while his body was bent to the ground.
"Zim, please... I -"
"DON'T COME WITH LOVE TO ME!"
The alien jumped up and dashed towards Dib, his eyes full with desperation. If he let Dib say it, if he let the human finish, he would lose the Dib he longed for forever -
But his attempt would not succeed; it was already too late.




--

I don't think Zim would ever admit that he's in love with Dib, no?
[At this point, I must apologize for my terrible writing these days. I lost the grip of literature. ._. ]

Well, if anyone could get what I wanted to say with that long... thing up there, yeah, that's the background of the picture.

It was really fun to draw it - and worth the time. I'd say it was... 7 hours? Heh.

--

Invader Zim (c) Jhonen Vasquez
Art (c) =chinara
Time of Work: 7 hours

Submission to the lovely *Z-A-D-R-club.

Critiques


Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icontsu-ku-yomi:
Mal wieder ein gelungenes Pic, Denise! Gefällt mir und der Hintergrund passt auch besser :)
Das Gesicht von Zim oder eher gesagt die Mimik ist dir am besten gelungen und wenn man sich die Hintergrundstory dazu noch durchliest, macht es das ganze äußerst interessant :D

--
Can you see the darkness? - Its life.....
:iconaaachtoeto:
Great work, really!
And I think that Zim still can finally admit that he is in love with Dib. If in one day he will learn that Tallest lied to him, maybe then.

--
My english is actually not so good as i would like. But I hope you still can understand me. :)
:iconcreativebeak:
Yeah... I like it ^^
Hm... I'm sorry but I haven't read the story yet but I will do it next time ^^
The background .... well done this time ^

--
Love. Life. Meaning. Over

~ New Moon
:iconecokitty:
Oh wow Denise, the story gave me goosebumps. Angst is love. <3 It's really well done, I don't know why you keep saying "bad bad bad" when it's epic. And you know it. >8D

Picture-wise, this is pretty darn awesome. The poses once again are just brilliant. Zim is all like "RAWR D8<" And the background is great. I really like your coloring too. <3 Good work!

--
"We jump, hit the Blooper, IN THE HOLE. H'Oh yes f*ck you yes! I am the---Whoa, that's a big...fire-stick" [link]
:iconmayfire44:
I liked the background...it reminds me of a city, and the triangular shape reminds me of New York City's Flat Iron building. XD

You are getting quite good at drawing Dib from the back. And Zim's face is quite emotional, as I imagine it would be at a time like that!

And man, I feel bad about not having any time to get online over the weekend. I remembered that I had a test on Monday, and Dad made us study (probably also due to the fact that we put a scratch on our car Friday XD). And I've also been working on a little something ;)

--
My community club sponsor once said a very profound thing that changed my future forever:

"If I could write a book, I'd write The Key to Effective Parenting: or 1,001 uses for duct tape."
:iconchinara:
Don't use ^^ that much. i might think of you as hypocrite.
But thank you very much for the comment! I appreciate it.

--
[...] Then, one of them lowered his binoculars.
"That's hundred bucks for me, Scar."
:iconchinara:
Yeah, of course... But when will that be? someday, one day...
Until then, let's make ill-prone-belly-producing works, no? :B

--
[...] Then, one of them lowered his binoculars.
"That's hundred bucks for me, Scar."
:iconchinara:
Vielen dank! Bin froh, dass es dir gefällt.

--
[...] Then, one of them lowered his binoculars.
"That's hundred bucks for me, Scar."
:iconchinara:
Really? 8D This makes me happier than a dancing cupcake! <3 Bad, bad, bad in the eye of the observer. In the observer. XD

D'awwwww, thank you for your lovely words! <3 I tried hard with the BG. x)

--
[...] Then, one of them lowered his binoculars.
"That's hundred bucks for me, Scar."

Details

June 21
175 KB
175 KB
550×550

Statistics

16
16 [who?]
243 (0 today)
7 (0 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map